Sentence pattern

The girl, that who has wear purple long t-shirt slowly walk. She is not beauty but interested. His name is Mona, the  friends her called is Mon. Once upon when she goes to campus with her friends, she as like a model. Use accessories and high-girl. While she walk up to the build, sees a Mans focus to her. A student Mans always talking about her, from about her boy friend until her material items used. I don’t know a background her life, and I only just look to a performs her  that is extravagant girl.

Paralelism / Paralel construction and paralel structure

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When I child. Early morning  I went to learn a school and the play in there. Before go to school, prepared material for  to learn. pick up the book, pencil, rules, and pen. Don’t forget permitted for both parents, father and mother. At The same time , ask travel money. After finish to learn, usually  go to the place, where I can played. Ex: in a river, garden, football field, and etc. I like fishing , playing , running and swimming.